Introduction
For this issue’s Q&A
feature, we asked our contributors to respond, as they might, to one
or more of the following quotations, from DR 7:
1. Rolf Hughes: “Open
the book: prose is more welcoming, more hospitable. Poetry can bully
and buttonhole, announcing its own importance before we’ve even consented
to sit and endure its recital. Prose poems, by contrast, do not instruct
how to react in advance. Hand-brake turns, embarrassing confessions,
sudden silences or refusals that crash the system, all these and more
can be smuggled into the unassuming code of the prose sentence or paragraph.
The line does not lie. The logic of juxtaposition, editing beyond reason;
each textual block a stadium for competing language games, the performance
of seeing (and inventing) connections; the polyphonic drum in pursuit
of resonance while the rest of the band have upped and gone home to
burp ‘n’ belch. Personally, I prefer my prose poems not to outstay
the welcome of a single published page – it’s almost an ethical
imperative…. To (appropriately) shift focus – the prose poem as
a hybrid of creative and critical writing, poetry and philosophy: Denis
Diderot’s Rameau’s Nephew, Walter Benjamin’s Arcades Project,
Osip Mandelstam’s ‘Conversation about Dante,’ Ludwig Wittgenstein’s
Philosophical Investigations, Robert Rauschenberg’s Combines, to mention
(men only and) no prose poems per se, but a fusion of sensibility and
intelligence, poet and critic, practitioner and theorist, visionary
and technician, so seamless, brilliant, and insightful that all such
reductive binary oppositions dissolve under the fierce heat of the inquiring
imagination. Let us therefore trust in the impulse of fragments to reveal
their logic eventually – whenever they find a place they might (momentarily)
call home.”
2. Jennifer K. Dick:
“What’s exciting in a poem in prose is that the page does not announce
the sort of sounds that are about to leap forth from the text. A prose
poem can rush, gurgle, yelp, squeal, moan, whisper—it is anything
but flat! I think in sound, in attention to the sense of snippit snatched
from the dark, it separates itself from a sense of prose stretched towards
poetry (as it certainly could be equally seen as the reverse). It functions
differently than both in certain author’s work, and could easily be
classified as either for others. For someone like myself who has always
been excited by visual use of the page and how that can mean (aurally
as well as to the eye) I think the prose poem offers us new spaces for
exploration. Thus far, its stark, box-like visuality has been explored
as variable in width (wall to wall margins, justified vs loose right
hand margin, etc.), size (length—small box on a single page—a window--versus
an entire book length “prose poem—a wall!), and even the displacements
of prose poems in a series have been explored as attentive to visuality,
making us move through what is essentially a prose book in a gallery
sort of way, constantly displacing us.”
3. Geoffrey Dyer: “Ultimately,
operating in one primary form is a choice, and that choice reflects
for the artist a suitability of purpose. Prose poems are willfully beautiful
from their content, the shapes of the objects they evoke, the places
that the reader sets those objects on their own mental canvas. The easy
casting off of line breaks allows for a smooth transaction/reversal
between builder, material, and user. The fact that the essential formal
material itself—words, punctuation marks, the occasional paragraph—are
as rudimentary as writing, only makes the non-architecture of the prose
poem more inhabitable, familiar, interchangeable, and functional. John
Cage examined Jasper Johns’ Flag using the metaphor of a table.
The table’s surface, he says, ‘stimulates the tendency to do something.
. .. The result is nothing special. It looks as though something had
been tried and had been found to work: to have many uses, not focusing
attention but letting attention focus itself.’”
4. Michael Cross (recapitulating
the debate over the short prose form and “honesty” from earlier
issues of DR): “I read the argument here (taken as a whole)
as a kind of two-fold proposition. On the one hand, the prose poem is
“honest” in the sense that it aspires to a kind of Heideggerian
active-passivity: the poem “calls” to the reader (in a “middle
voice”), but does not explicitly teach her how to read. Said reader
invents the poem as she discerns (or doesn’t!) its measure, reading
to the rhythm of her internal metronome (as Pound would have it); in
other words, the reader may or may not “hear” the more nuanced or
subtle polyrhythms of the poem, depending on her skills as a reader,
but that’s out of the poet’s hands. The second ‘fold’ of the
proposition is that, according to [Joyelle] McSweeney, the prose poem
is a democracy of constituent parts. By allowing “everything to show(s)
in the sentence,” by creating a window for the reader to exist next
to the poem’s “flash in the pan,” she (the reader) experiences
the very real autonomy of “choice.” Some aspects of the poem will
speak to her; others will blend in with the wallpaper of language on
the page. But she has a choice, and she’s not “bamboozled” into
making it (and this is, finally, “honest”).” (For Cross’s own
extended take, see http://www.webdelsol.com/Double_Room/7/Michael_Cross.htm.)
5. John Olson: “To
repeat Pound: ‘Literature is language charged with meaning.’ This,
as LaFemina has stated, is the fundamental drive in poetry. To expand,
dilate, intensify. To heighten our response to life, reality, ourselves.
Lineation acts as a lens to converge. Our attention is focused on a
twist, a turn, a sudden leap to another perception. The prose poem is
a lens that acts to diverge. To ramify, vary, deviate, digress. Veer,
straggle, meander, drift. To be as inclusive as possible. To become
an anomaly so wanton and supple the words dream themselves into a torrent
of unbridled rhythms, irrepressible being.”
6. Ben Miller: “This
is in response to James McCorkle’s interesting statement in DR #6:
‘I like the solidity of the block of prose, thinking of the page itself
as the containment and the prose as that density filling the page and
no more…’ Often—in my mind—I flip that equation, seeking language
which will expose the richness/density of the empty page. The fewer
words in a story, the closer that it resembles those extraordinary moments
of wordless communication that people exchange with each other, and
animals, even trees and the sky. The beauty is contained in the blank
space around the text, murmuring of possibilities each reader can truly
call their own.”
Responses
Rolf Hughes: "…the prose
poem as a hybrid of creative and critical writing, poetry and philosophy…"
That it's a hybrid makes it all the more essential for the writer to
hone her skills in both poetry and prose to create what we call prose
poetry. The prose poem (and there needs to be a new term; the form
deserves this much, doesn't it?) is, along with Rolf Hughes definition,
also an exercise in successful mutability. Here we have not just a scrap
of prose or an unbroken poem, but the best—the essential parts—of
a piece of fine prose married (fused, mated?) with the precise pacing,
particular word weights, and the language of poetic lines "recipeed"
together to form—why not?—a seamless bagatelle of writing.
Prose poems require a writer—a poet—to reach outside any comfort
zone as well as to reach deeper inside her own comfort zone and select
the best properties from both environments. And then (and here's the
real work and skill) figuring out the best way to weave these two worlds
together.
Maybe to use a word like "mutation" would indicate we're thumbing
through the wrong dictionary, but is the phrase genre evolution
so far off? Certainly, this coming together deserves a better name than
prose + poem. (And don't get me started on creative non + fiction.)
Michael Leong
I like John Olson’s conception
of the prose poem as “a lens that acts to diverge.” This is surely
the case with the prose poems of Estela Lamat (as one of her personae,
La Llorona, says, “My intention branches through space and between
doors and doors that I convoke”)—thus her choice to justify the
right hand margin, to go coast-to-coast with a torrent of words that
stains the blankness of the page like an oil slick. It is true, as Ben
Miller remarks, that there is a “richness/density of the empty page,”
though, for Lamat, this blank space is more terrifying than beautiful.
Her poetry, I believe, is born out of the constant struggle between
the density of poetic language and the density of a horrifying silence.
So in “[My intention branches through space…]” we experience the
expansion of La Llorona’s lubricious tear while in “[she screamed
to her mother…”] we are left with the almost unbearable roar of
the unspeakable.
Chauna Craig
I lose myself—deliriously—in
white space. Skate in from the side and filch a line here, tumble to
the empty bottom margin. Fall out of the book. On the way, trip over
dropped lines, bruising my flesh on hard words that jut out and draw
attention (and blood). Poems, for me, are physical adventures. I choose
my risks. Back out any time.
Why the prose poem then? Why
race to the same margin line after line, a decisionless, divisionless
maze? Because I can't escape. Language frames me. Guilty as charged.
I have to face the music: syllable by syllable, relentless, raucous.
Meaning wriggles in the tiny gaps between words, white space that doesn't
let me stretch and leap but holds me, squeezing now and then, until
there is finally only white space. And me. Breathless, still caught
in my head, in the seizing web of words.
Peter Davis
I tell my wife, all the time,
"here's the problem: You touch stuff, that's a problem. Don't touch
stuff, that's a problem too." Also, I think the first few seconds
of silence before Dylan's "Like a Rolling Stone" are some
of the best few instants I've ever heard, only because what follows
is so beautiful.”
Asher Ghaffar
Maybe haunting doesn't make
distinctions between prose poetry and poem, but instead is like a perverse
perfume which emanates from decay. I am decaying, rotting with ancestors
who come from another place and another history to haunt this place
and leave the body with an open form that doesn’t exactly follow the
delineations of prose poem and poem. Maybe haunting is what makes form
interesting, opens the crevices of the heart and splits the heart: makes
it impossible to move into the present because the present has never
belonged to us.
Thus haunted, we are searching for form, to reconnect to other social
groups without the burden of having to represent ourselves. Thus haunted,
perhaps we are the precursors of a future place where all hauntings
find release. The text I am writing is a place where haunting finds
release. Theresa Cha writes: Our destination is fixed on the perpetual
motion of search. Darwish, in “State of Seige” warns the reader
not to trust the poem. The poem, he tells us, “is the sense of the
abyss.”
The border provides a metaphoric anchorage for search.
John Olson: “To repeat Pound: 'Literature is language charged with
meaning.' This, as LaFemina has stated, is the fundamental drive in
poetry. To expand, dilate, intensify. To heighten our response to life,
reality, ourselves. Lineation acts as if a lens to converge. Our attention
is focused on a twist, a turn, a sudden leap to another perception.
The prose poem is a lens that acts to diverge. To ramify, vary, deviate,
digress. Veer, straggle, meander, drift. To be as inclusive as possible.
To become an anomaly so wanton and supple the words dream themselves
into a torrent of unbridled rhythms, irrepressible being.”
Olson's distinction between prose poem and poem has its origin in the
postmodern desire to distance itself from modernism. Does the poem line
converge and the prose line poem diverge? Why can't the prose poem break
off into poetry and poetry break off into prose poem? If a poem converges,
why can't it also diverge?
I follow an unravelling thread of twisted sound and yarn until, confounded
and exasperated, I hit a wall. At this point, the poem might disperse
like white clouds caught in crystal, or a prose block might condense
like a fist -- flowering. Prose poem lines can converge and diverge
and converge again. Why not shift the ground of both forms? I glimpse
myself as condensation. I boil a phrase down to one revealatory future
image. That allows another tone, an alteration of form, another text
to emerge. This urge arises from the grinding of organs.
The exasperation with form allows inclusion to occur and makes all forms
possible: condensation and dilation of the line, metaphor and metonymy:
a synthesis between binary distinctions. Perhaps these distinctions
are rooted in the West's preoccupation with its own cultural trends
and forms.
The literature that engages me searches for its form. Being cannot be
held in either the prose or the poetry line, but in a space between
both forms where I reside as possibility. A different definition of
prose poetry enables hybrid ways of being, being with conflict and unknowing,
as well as moments of being. I am searching for a form to house something
potentially infinite.
Brian Evenson
I don’t really think of fiction
(except for maybe bad fiction) as either welcoming or hospitable, nor
do I think of poetry as inherently more rigorous in its approach to
rhythm, syntax, and language than prose, be it shorter or longer. I
would argue that something like a Gary Lutz sentence (just to mention
one name among many) offers as many possibilities as a really good line
or as a wrought prose block for linguistic patterning and play. And
it manages to bring about that patterning--that pleasure of rhythm and
sound and repetition--at the same time as it offers a narrative progression.
The result is a work that is steeped not only in the pleasures of language
but also in those of story and fabula. At its best, the short prose
piece has its so-called cake and eats it to; at its worst it just ends
up smearing fragments of cake all over the walls.
I’m suspicious of the impulse to say what the short prose piece is.
But I’m probably even more suspicious of the impulse to see short
prose somehow as a liberated form, as a form that offers the lure of
freedom. Once people start making such claims about a genre (or, for
that matter, about a country) the freedom is already evaporating and
the genre is already well on the way to being pretty seriously reified.
That’s the moment when you
need first of all to spend time understanding the space that the genre
has defined and then next slash and burn new paths through that space.
You need to start cutting new paths into the forest of the genre itself,
making new clearings where you can briefly catch your breath before
hacking your way onward. But if you’re not careful, you’ll lapse
back on the same old paths even as you preach freedom and liberation.
The genre I’m speaking of is not poetry, not prose, but the genre
of the short prose piece: it’s a genre now, equipped with various
subgenres and has been for at least a hundred years: if you think otherwise,
you’re willfully blind. But genre is a tool and a device like any
other. It’s there to be taken advantage of. So take advantage.
Elisabeth Whitehead
See how tidy it is, homely
even, no raised patterns to hug onto the cloak it wears—a simple garment
pinned around its shoulders, comfortable in its own plainness. Initially
the prose poem is quiet about itself until one enters and is caught—the
possibility then of being suspended and surprised in a last light.
I am always, ultimately, unprepared for what I find there, lulled at
first perhaps by its faceless approach. Little windows, little
chambers, eyes to look into and be looked back into—I begin to expect
to not know what to expect. I believe there is something in the visual
anonymity that will allow me to accept, for instance, that snow is really
a contour of new dimes fallen, or that the dimes are a new rain, fallen,
that the sea is covered in a sheath of salt. I appreciate being
thrown into this place of a person blindfolded, which is never safe—and
a falling. There seems to be some rebellion there, or at least
a bit of mischief—this tension created between “flat” appearance
and such wide possibility of gesture, story, fragmentation, and music.
I’ve found that this form has allowed me more mobility in sound, not
less. It affords tiny precision, little black and white keys of
precise breath and rhythm.
Meg Sefton
I am not feeling clever enough
to say clever things about prose and poetry. I have graduated from a
place where people said all kinds of interesting things about literature,
where people read challenging material. I am in a very dark hole at
the moment. It's called mainstream America. People do not read here.
Upon graduating with an MFA, I got a job teaching literature at a suburban
prep school. The only thing upper school kids want to read Harry Potter,
and I don't blame them. Kids are yearning to be kids and the culture
fights against that in their push for kids to be both sexually mature
and academically brilliant by the time they are eleven. This is what
I think is missing in our prose: plot. This is why Harry Potter stole
the kids. This is why J.K. Rolling steals the spotlight, and why other
plot geniuses from other generations, such as Dickens, stole the spotlight
once upon a time. In our attempts to be clever, we have forgotten the
basic element of what makes great fiction. We think plot is too pedestrian.
The best prose has many fine materials, is textured and layered and
nuanced, but if that yearning to be told a story is ignored, any unit
of prose is nothing but a collection of words.
Noah Eli Gordon
Today is Monday, September
1st, 2008, and today I don’t believe in genre. Tomorrow,
I’ll tell my students something different, I’m sure, but today is
do I contradict myself, multitudes, etc. Tomorrow: Baudelaire said,
Bertrand said, Rimbaud said, Mallarmé said, Joyce said, Beckett said…
Why all the boys? Genre is preformative. There’s tokenism for you.
I know a flower when I see it, says the dandelion leaning toward the
light. What good is a theory of prose in the age of the author’s control
of the margins? Verbal alchemy’s an oily mechanism, digitally speaking.
If it’s a sentence, it must mean something, right? Très passé. The
only post I believe in (today, right now, two minutes after the first
sentence above) is the one pried from the ground in order to steal the
bicycle that was locked to it. Writing. There it is. That’s what we’re
doing. Okay, so writing is a genre. I know it when I see it: billboards,
traffic signs, novels, menus—there is order and there is one’s order;
and there are poisoned appetizers. What are you working on? I’m writing
a menu for the How to Live What to Do Café. We do not serve Flash Fictions.
Just because you’re engaged in an ancient craft doesn’t mean you’re
any more likely to stay afloat. Robert Graves via God of War & Clash
of the Titans means my menu makes hunger mute. Audio: a common word
with the highest vowels to consonants ratio. There enough there to shape
several formal allegories, but that’s the business of those intent
on talking themselves into future commemorative plaques on student housing.
Our literature does not age with us. It is we who are aged by it. Nothing
is as indispensable as the notion of the time-honored mode, for time
would continue working its rust over casting elements into a medallion
destined for the display case. Nonetheless, our habitual return to particular
scenarios speaks of the desire to canonize the footprints we’ve been
following, even if they turn out to be our own. Would that the woods
of literature really were so bewildering! A few trees make a forest
not. A stranger’s arrival is another’s departure, which is to say
there is only one form after all: disruption. Thus to begin to hack,
saw, and mulch the remnants of whatever may have been rooted within
our notion of genre is to honor its plurality by pointing to the remaining
spot, and, no matter how bare it might appear, calling it the most spectacular
verdancy one has ever seen. To trample a garden is to refuse again the
world of shadows. I is never an empire. If I ever make it to the end
of the board, I just ask for another pawn—the real work of fiction,
poetically speaking a prose.
Jordan Sanderson
In response to Rolf Hughes
and John Olson:
Possibility gives birth to
the prose poem, and the prose poem perpetuates possibility.
When giving someone a gift, one has a few options: one can simply hand
the gift to the recipient; one can leave the gift in the bag in which
the clerk placed it at the point of purchase, a bag often emblazoned
with the store’s logo—slightly more surprising than simply handing
over the gift itself, but the recipient still knows where you bought
it and has some idea of what to expect; one can wrap the gift itself,
but the wrapping paper—no matter how beautiful—takes the shape of
the gift and too often reveals what is inside long before the recipient
rips it off and wads it up; finally, one can place the gift inside of
a box, then wrap it. The prose poem functions in a manner similar
to the box: it creates mystery, excitement, curiosity. The sense
that anything could be in there. Unlike the box, once the reader
enters the prose poem, the feeling of possibility grows. The prose
poem stretches boundaries, including the boundaries of space and time,
and, frequently, it permanently enlarges boundaries. It is “inclusive,”
as John Olson says. Ideally, each prose poem would build on previous
prose poems, continuing to expand previously challenged boundaries,
or else it would find new boundaries to push, ever widening the sense
of possibility from which the poems began. However, a single prose
poem can’t completely destroy all boundaries, so the task of each
poem is to broaden boundaries as far as it can and to avoid closure
for as long as it can. To maximize inclusivity. Some readers
might object that expansion dilutes; however, as the space expands it
also fills, producing a greater intensity. The prose poem rewards
readers with a richer world.
Andrew Grace
My feelings about writing poetry
in prose are very much in line with John Olsen’s description of the
prose poem. For whatever reason, I feel that I can be more inclusive
of wild shifts in language in and between prose poems than I can in
lineated poetry. Maybe it’s because the shape of the prose poem itself
is less expressive than a poem that uses the white space of the page,
so I unconsciously feel like I have to push the boundaries of sense
to counterbalance the “normal” look of prose. Or maybe it’s that
the absence of line breaks, the continuous ribbon of language that a
prose poem is, allows the mind to follow a thought to its strangest
ends, unchecked by considerations of shape. Maybe the prose poem is
the ideal vehicle for a mind to trace, and extend, its own boundaries.
Zach Savich
(In response to Jennifer K.
Dick's thoughts about sound and space.)
I like the continuity of a prose poem for how it can hold varied material,
the way the continuity of a sidewalk allows someone who trips to catch
himself with a few running steps.
Or a few dancing steps -- fragment against run-on, sudden rhyme, snippet.
I'd like to believe the prose poem can signal a failure of form in which
formal gravities re-assert themselves. Like how sitting in a piazza
can mark your failure at finding an apartment.
But if I love most moments of lushness, do they need a flat ground to
spring up against? Or maybe prose poems aren't gardens marked by abrupt
blossoms, but, in contrast to the constant blinking of line breaks,
a way of keeping your eyes open until the whole landscape turns watery.
Jennifer K. Dick's focus on sonic and visual possibility seems right:
I'd my prose poems to do more than transmit a "prose poemy"
tone. Just as I'd like my meditative free verse lyrics to transmit more
than a tea-sipping tone. Which in both cases can hold a lot together,
and shade the cast of one's eyes, but to make what visible?
I like prose poems that illuminate (that is, hold like light does) like
direct sun, which suggests there is nothing in this light we cannot
see. That take the air, but do not make it solely internal.
How do prose poems do that? Here is a taxonomy, aligning the prose square
with the city square:
1. A prose poem is a city square in which a fountain suddenly comes
on.
2. Some dogs enter the fountain.
3. There is a city square full of dogs and we built a fountain around
them.
4. When the fountain is dry, jugglers are more likely to perform in
it.
Rauan Klassnik
This is not a direct response
to any of the quotes sent to Rauan Klassnik, but it is what he says
he jotted down after reading them:
The personality of in these prose poems is not me but I suppose it is
more "me" (or just "more") than if I wrote in line-broken
poems. I think this has something to do with the medium of prose. But
I think this also that it has something to do with "me." I
have in a sense taken refuge in the prose poem. Perhaps this means I
am "lazy" or "unethical." In response to this I
could say that I think I word hard and that I think I am a good person.
(I am thinking now of Yeats. Whatever.) A part of me wants you, the
reader, to enjoy the mix of sex/death/violence/God/love in my poems
(ie, to like "me.") Another part of "me" (the part--or
parts--that clenches "me" into a fist when I'm writing) does
not want this. I think that all poets should (at least sometimes) write,
playfully or seriously, in prose.
Peter Moore
Philosophy Master: Beyond
a doubt. Is it verse that you want to write her?
Monsieur Jourdain:
No, no, no verse.
Philosophy Master: You want
only prose?
Monsieur Jourdain:
No, I don’t want either prose or verse.
Philosophy Master:
It has to be one or the other.
Monsieur Jourdain: Why?
Philosophy
Master: For the reason, sir, that there is nothing to express ourselves
in but prose or verse.
Monsieur Jourdain:
There’s nothing but prose or verse?
Philosophy Master:
That’s right, sir: whatever isn’t prose is verse, and whatever isn’t
verse is prose.
--Le Bourgeois Gentilhomme
Monsieur Jourdain, maybe you’re
right. Maybe, there is something else. Some prose
can seem more disjunctive than verse. Some verse can seem more
hyperjunctive than the most straightforward prose. It can
all get so maddening. Every variation seems possible. Disjunctive
associations can happen at the syllabic level--poets with their etymological
wordplay. Other times you’re on familiar terra firma of some
soothing text only to have all expectations violated with the final
punctuation mark. How curious that such a simple morphological
variable as a carriage return could be assigned such a dizzying array
behavioral attributes. Maybe, Monsieur Jourdain, there is something
else. Was it Valéry who proposed that poetry was a state of flux?
I can’t remember now. Then I propose a New Quantum poetics based
on the principles of quantum physics. Poetry is merely a state
of flux, an excited state of atomic agitation. Does that make
prose a stationary ground state? Or is one simply more metastable
than the other? The orbitals may vary but it’s still the same
hydrogen atom insisting on either ionization or decay.
Trina Burke
In response to Michael Cross,
DR #7:
“How can we challenge ourselves
as prose poets to rethink the form? I don’t think it’s enough to
argue that a prose poem is different from verse simply because it doesn’t
have line breaks, or that a prose poem is different from fiction simply
because it relies on parataxis. How could we complicate the prose poem,
critically, by rethinking these distinctions? Why would we want
to “relax,” and aren’t we trying to come to conclusions that
are not inevitable?
And finally: what does
it even mean for a poem to be “honest”?
I’m interested in a poetry
that challenges what can be done with the line. A poetry that never
relaxes, but thinks itself, its composition, at every moment. Every
turn of composition is decision, and the polysemy of this fact
increases the poem’s potential to mean otherwise. The poem’s autonomy,
the reader’s autonomy, is a product of multivalence—horizontal and
vertical movement (and this is true of all poetry). I suppose
I write a kind of prose poem, in the sense that I’m interested in
the possibilities of the long line, but I absolutely cannot ignore
the fact that the line must end (even in prose). I’m interested in
challenging the line to hold all of its possibilities at once—a line
that embeds verse in a prose sentence. Isn’t the “honest” poet
working toward the complexity of the situation as she has it in the
moment? And isn’t the “honest” reader comporting to this moment
in the complexity of her understanding as a subject split into thousands
of subjectivities? What does this have to do with the prose line specifically?
Isn’t it time we give it more thought?”
Mr. Cross raises some important
questions here that, for me, get at the distinction between definition
and exploration. Indeed, it isn’t enough to determine the prose poem
by its difference from other genres/modes. Cross says “I’m interested
in challenging the line to hold all of its possibilities at once....”
This is key, but to “embed verse in a prose sentence” is only one
of the possibilities that the form holds.
When I write, I don’t necessarily
sit down with the intention of writing a prose poem or a verse poem.
It is an unfolding process. More often than not, I spend time to forge
material into prose when it particularly and directly challenges the
linearity of the traditional sentence. I run the material through this
filter when it can most effectively undermine the reader’s expectations
of prose. It’s a strategic move designed to do the most damage to
the reader’s sense of complacency or trust in a (visually) familiar
genre.
The line’s trusted brand
status and relative inability to defend itself are other possibilities
(in addition to embedding verse in prose, which is, in effect, another
form of undermining the reader’s expectations) for exploration. These
possibilities eschew the value judgment of honesty, which is, in my
opinion, overrated in this context. The label of honesty assumes the
very qualities of neatness and comfort and accessibility that currently
limit the sentence to the status of commodity for passive consumption.
I’m not interested in maintaining the sentence’s integrity as a
safe haven. I’d rather promote the sentence as a dangerous place.
Stephen Nelson
Personally, I'm more interested
in poetry with a visual component. Something that announces itself on
the page as "a poem", with all the concomitant expectations
of sound, syntax and sense which that brings seems to me increasingly
outmoded and irrelevant. A prose poem on the other hand is as seductive
as a visual poem, as alluring as a piece of illuminated text. In a day
when a lot of poetry is read online from computer moniters, it's also
kinder on the eyes.
A good prose poem is like
a top welterweight or middleweight - fast, sleek, well-toned, powerful,
graceful, elegant, deadly. Its older brother the verse is the dull,
uninteresting heavyweight champion - fat, bloated, pudgy, slow and desperately
in need of a Muhammad Ali to make it lively and relevant again. Unfortunately,
the world at large is only concerned with the heavyweights, unaware
of all the lively action exploding in other, less prominent categories.
Incidently, one of my favourite prose poets of all time is Thomas "The
Hit Man" Hearns.
J.M. Tyree
In her essay "The Narrow
Bridge of Art," Virginia Woolf recommended the "democratic
art of prose," arguing that "prose is so humble that it can
go anywhere; no place is too low, too sordid, or too mean for it to
enter." I think of Baudelaire's prose poems in similar terms, as
an attempt to bind art to the grime of modern cities and contemporary
life. I also think of Whitman at the same kind of work in New York City,
around the same historical moment. In his poem "The City Dead-House,"
for example, he tries to assimilate the unclaimed corpse of a prostitute
to his urban pantheism. The result is troubling, unsettling; perhaps
not entirely successful, but new. In his own prose, Whitman spoke of
the "beauty disease" of the Victorian mode, with its overly
ornate, casket-like word-coverings for life. Contact with reality -
with the prose of the world - would make poetry less Poetic and more
prose-like. Today such work might even be called "creative nonfiction."
To my way of thinking, poetry cannot and should not be replaced by prose.
There is no substitute. Poetry is needful in any era. But I do think
that the online universe craves prose. "Text" may be a better
term than prose or poetry for digital writing. Many people who resist
digital culture do not seem to recognize that its fabric is composed
of text - of writing - on a fundamental level. I do think that, as with
Baudelaire in Paris and Whitman in New York, new forms of writing eventually
will emerge online. Most likely these works will be very short and if
they are artful they may well have the appearance of prose poems - call
them what you will.
Tony Tost
John Olson: “To repeat Pound:
‘Literature is language charged with meaning.’ This, as LaFemina
has stated, is the fundamental drive in poetry. To expand, dilate, intensify.
To heighten our response to life, reality, ourselves. Lineation acts
as a lens to converge. Our attention is focused on a twist, a turn,
a sudden leap to another perception. The prose poem is a lens that acts
to diverge. To ramify, vary, deviate, digress. Veer, straggle, meander,
drift. To be as inclusive as possible. To become an anomaly so wanton
and supple the words dream themselves into a torrent of unbridled rhythms,
irrepressible being.”
TT: “Ratios of Paradise” is in some spliced place between lineated
and prosed poetry. My writing of it pivoted on the notion of a charged
equivalency, of meaning generated in the gap between the two sides of
each entry (and the entries themselves). At first blush, this ratio-nalization
is pretty counter to my sense of my own mythic impulse, my need to step
through the rational so to operate outside of it, to where things are
more generative. But as Adorno and Horkheimer point out, the seed of
the ratio (the base unit of logic) is in the mythic moment as well,
and can be read in the ritual practice of sacrifice as a means of influencing
the gods by offering to them some symbolic equivalency of the sins,
needs or gratitude of the polis. That is, myth contains within itself
the modality that would come to supercede it. And vice versa. Circles
everywhere! In my piece here, I try to bring in the self-containment
and forward direction of the declarative sentence, but to use the suggestion
of a sacrificed copula to signal the relation between the parts. I am
trying to construct a cascade of felt equivalencies (“The mouth”
“a circle at the end of a ritual”) that combine together to suggest
a total equivalency to some palpable, un-nameable X.
Ed Taylor
A prose poem is a fragment
calved from a larger ongoing project most formally named by the Cubists
but apparent in various forms many other places. Prose poetry attempts
to open all approaches to particular material and decenter (deprivilege?)
narrative, using language aware of itself and fully deployed in radioactive
majesty, not merely as delivery vehicle for a unilateral negotiation
with meaning.
The "prose" brings material as a kind of vaccination, more
straightforwardly, rather than via the serpentine digestive path of
something that is formally "poem." The effect is for the reader
somatic and cognitive, music and lyrics, the house with hidden rooms,
peyote and cocaine.
Such a project can be tackled in standard prose. However, as this requires
strenuous perceptual activity on the reader's end and requires daunting
focus and discipline from the writer, except in rare instances it's
maximal miniature rather than marathon: prose poetry.
Rob Carney
First and last, I'm a poet.
In between, I've written the occasional play and a fair amount of what
various people call flash or sudden or micro fiction. Me, I call these
pieces monologues, which doesn't do a lot to help clarify things, but
I absolutely have the oral tradition in mind rather than any of the
Issue 7 theory-chatter about visual this-and-that or "stadiums
for competing language games. I mean, there's nothing about other literary
forms that can't likewise "rush, gurgle, yelp, squeal, moan, whisper"
in the ways Jennifer Dick asserts the prose poem does. Such qualities
aren't particular to any one form; a poem (or prose poem, or short story,
or play) might be amazing, might stink, or might fall somewhere in between,
but what the words look like typed out on the page has less to do with
it than what they sound like and what they mean. . . . As for Wittgenstein,
Heidegger, John Cage, and all that crowd, I prefer Frost ("The
Figure a Poem Makes") and Frank O'Hara ("Personism: A Manifesto").
Whether I write sonnets, free verse, prose poems, or sometimes things
with no editorially established category, it's the subject or tone or
theme that governs my formal/structural choices. Still, I've noticed
that those pieces tend, a good chunk of the time, to be interior monologues
or soliloquies, so my focus on the sentence rather than on line breaks
makes sense to me, and in this way I'm most able to identify with what
John Olsen was saying about "[t]he prose poem [being] a lens that
acts to diverge . . . vary, deviate, digress[,] [v]eer," and so
on. And I appreciate, too, that in making his distinction between prose
poems and lineation ("[l]ineation acts as a lens to converge")
he's being neither perjorative nor self-congratulatory. Oh, and I also
like what Geoffrey Dyer was quoting: "It looks as though something
had been tried and been found to work." Not a flashy expression
or observation. But it makes up for that by being right.
Kellie Wells
Few people know that what Groucho
Marx originally said is “Outside of a dog a prose poem is a fiction
writer’s best friend. Inside of a dog it's too dark to read.” And
I do think of the prose poem as a very solicitous, loyal form that allows
me, as both a writer and reader, to baldly grope around associatively
in the murk in just the way that I find pleasing and stimulating and
eventually even illuminating. I take the form for a walk, toss it a
tennis ball, give it a dentabone, and it responds to the cosseting,
serves me well, allows me to strain a metaphor perversely. It’s a
form that will more readily suffer a wag’s most questionable impulses—compression
transforms gestures that a conventional story and its votaries would
sniff at.
Gretchen Henderson
in response to Jennifer K.
Dick:
Having trained as a classical
vocalist, I too “think in sound,” like Jennifer K. Dick evocatively
describes. In the prose poem, the sentence offers a capacious three-dimensional
space, almost clandestinely. Each sentence links to ones before and
behind, without formal lineation, appearing directional like fiction
but building aurally and in constellation, guided more by pliability
than by plot.
To me, classification matters
less than the chance to enter a compressed stanza (in the sense of “room”
or “dwelling”). To hear its acoustic potential: its implied
lineation and sonic logic. I think of John Cage going into an
anechoic chamber (“a room without echoes”) to hear absolute silence.
Hearing two sounds, one high and one low (which the sound engineer identified
as his nervous system and blood circulation), Cage realized that true
silence doesn’t exist. By calling my prose poems “Exhibits,”
I evade a specific generic label and enter the gallery space (as titled,
Galerie de Difformité), where exhibits A, B, C, etc. aggregate
like a curated collection and thus contain a narrative agenda, however
masked, and secondarily become exhibits with political implications
(allied to “exhibits,” as in a legal trial). Therewith exist other
“mani-”pulations (since “exhibit” involves the hand, literally,
meaning “to hold out”). While not “I” in an autobiographic sense,
each “Exhibit” becomes an authorial offering of sorts. This physiologic
dimension seems tethered to any vocal act—which I consider the prose
poem to be, a vocal act—derived from a living, breathing body.
Jim Ferris has written intricately
about “The Enjambed Body,” drawing upon A.R Ammons’ description
(“A poem is a walk”), adding of himself: “when I walk, I aim to
get somewhere. If my meters are sprung, if my feet are uneven, if my
path is irregular, that’s just how I walk. And how I write.” The
prose poem, to me, seems to embody our want, as a species, for movement—physical,
aural, what have you—made apparent by limitations, which fuel shifts
in perception. Restrictions may change; other constraints may be imposed.
A sonnet can be curta(i)led, its lines streamed or cut. But I’m curious
about what movement occurs within a “stark, box-like” block—the
body of that block. Jennifer Dick refers to the gallery “as making
us move through what is essentially a prose book in a gallery sort of
way, constantly displacing us.” Such displacing movement is one of
many aspects that draw me again and again to the gallery to think about
narrative strategy. Generally speaking, displacement seems essential
to understand where we are, where we’ve come from, where we yet might
go. In the gallery, there’s not a determined path, since each vectored
variation suggests an alternative path (and thus, requires choice),
yet we’re still guided by a curator and bound (at least, in a traditional
gallery) by a single entrance and exit.
What is restricted and what
is not (the ubiquitous “Do not touch” versus “Please touch!”)
converses and connects, like the voice is a part of and not
apart from the body. Prose poetry (to call it by a name, ambivalently,
throughout this response) is a generous and generative genre, a “between”
that withstands deformity and mutation, almost evolutionary in nature.
It is not without genre, still derived from genus (as Ron Silliman
describes in Double Room #3). With modulation at work under the
surface, there’s a musical quality, to be sure, but one that also
seems diminished when forced into a superficially-bound musical analogy,
like “polyphony.” Although silence in the prose poem may be
less visually apparent, in terms of white space as described by Mallarmé,
it exists as pulses of nerves and blood intercourse in the “stark,
box-like” block, like Cage heard such sounds in his echo-proof chamber.
My relationship with prose
poetry began as a high school teacher, taking a night course called
“The Short Short Story.” Its title appealed to me because of economy:
the intriguing “short short” seemed to be all that I had time for.
Now (having received an M.F.A. in fiction and being in the final stages
of a Ph.D. concentration in the same genre, coming at poetry through
a backdoor all the while), I wonder what might have happened had the
professor called that introductory course “The Prose Poem.”
Mark Lane
The following two statements
converge with my own thoughts about prose poems.
Rolf Hughes: "Poetry can bully and buttonhole, announcing its own
importance before we’ve even consented to sit and endure its recital.
Prose poems, by contrast, do not instruct how to react in advance."
Geoffrey Dyer: "The fact that the essential formal material itself—words,
punctuation marks, the occasional paragraph—are as rudimentary as
writing, only makes the non-architecture of the prose poem more inhabitable,
familiar, interchangeable, and functional."
Though I enjoy verse, I don't always trust it. It is my impression that at
the current cultural moment, if not always in the past, to write in
verse is to make (and/or reject, which amounts to the same thing) fairly
specific assumptions about the reader. Prose poems don't, to my mind,
start off as such narrowly specialized products. The boundary separating
prose generated for practical purposes from prose generated for artistic
purposes is happily indistinct. Poetry shows up in all kinds of unsuspecting
prose. Prose can thus be packed with intent while appearing vaguely innocent.
This is an illusion, sure, but an illusion that allows poems and stories
to feel inevitable, which is important.
Craig Morgan Teicher
Responding to quotation 1
For the most part, I don’t
like the idea of prose poem or flash fiction. I don’t actually
quite believe that prose poetry and flash fiction represent forms, a
genre, even a strategy for approaching writing. The idea I do
like is the idea of prose as a substance with particular—and admittedly
variable—qualities. Verse is also a substance, with some shared,
and some unique qualities. Both are made of the same basic material—words—but
in each, the material is deployed differently, engendering different
effects, like the way water treated with cold becomes ice, making whatever
it touches colder, whereas if it’s treated with heat, it boils and
cooks things.
Maybe prose is more like water
treated with cold, verse more like water treated with heat. That
is far from being a rule. It may very well be the opposite.
Richard Howard says—and I’m
not sure if he got this from someone else—that “verse reverses,
prose proceeds.” That’s pretty much it: a page of prose tells you
to read and then turn the page right away, whereas a page of verse tells
you to turn around and read it again. Prose refers to an object,
person, place that it means to conjure in your head or instruct you
to seek in the experienced world. The whole life of verse, on
the other hand, takes place amongst the words as they are arranged on
paper, or as they hang in the air for your ear to receive. Poetry
doesn’t refer, it is, or the only object to which it really refers
is itself. Prose is the opposite.
And, of course, whenever anyone
sets up that kind of opposition, it means the truth is somewhere between
the poles.
So, as far as I can tell prose
poetry/ flash fiction manages to combine some of the qualities of verse
and some of prose into a single substance. Ice that burns a bit,
hot water that makes things cold. No matter how it looks on the page—a
pile of paragraphs, a big block of text, a parade of precariously long
versy lines—this substance can be simplistically defined in one of
the following ways: 1) verse meant to be read only once, 2) prose that
compels you to read it again, 3) verse that refers to a world outside
itself and isn’t its own object, or 4) prose whose life occurs only
amongst its own words.
And, as above, the truth is
of course somewhere in between. In fact, what this substance
is doesn’t much matter. What’s important is what it
does, how it acts when poured into the empty beaker of a blank page
and combined with a pair of eyes. It’s necessarily an experimental
scenario, in the literal sense, in as much as the substance a reader
is confronted with could be any one of a number of things, or a combination
of several, and the only way to tell which is to read.
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